Tips/wisdom from
Apex Magazine slush readers on submitting and
writing short fiction:
Hooks are the primary reason many stories fail. You've got to
hook a reader at the beginning, not forget to keep the momentum
building throughout the middle, and offer a sense of closure by the
end.
The end should conclude the journey, but leave a reader
wanting more. And be wary of surprise endings.
Utilize
point of view and narrative style to convey a great deal of
background information without actually having to talk about it
openly.
As you build your world, don't get caught in providing detail. Add
just enough
salt for readers to get the flavor - a
springboard for
their imaginations to take over.